One of the characters in my story (actually the second story) uses a pair of swords. This is the origin of those swords,,, well more or less. What isn’t said is that the swords were created and then the wielder of them was summoned/created to use them. He was a bodyguard/companion for the uh, not princess, but whatever the daughter of an emperor is called. She ended up falling in love with him and later married him. Together they spawned the line that eventually leads to the character who uses the swords and the brother of that character. Both main characters in the ’second book’. Due to the nature of the world, the characters in the book are not aware of their noble lineage.
Mostly this is about describing stuff, blocking (as in keeping locations accurate) and describing fight scenes. The next one is, hopefully, going to focus on dialog. Dialog is by far my weakest area it is extremly tough for me to make it flow properly and make the characters distinct. It tends to sound like the same character having a multiple personality attack.
One last thing. I have been playing a lot of Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess and it shows in the text. Sorry.